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初中英语写作思维导图

一提到写英语作文,很多同学都无从下笔,总是“信手写来”,没有规划。这样做的后果是,作文篇章结构不清晰,内容选择可能会脱离主题,从而影响作文的总体得分。小简老师为了帮助大家解决这一难题,带来了英语写作思维导图,让你以后作文提笔前胸有成竹,次次稳拿满分!

初中英语写作思维导图,掌握住,英语作文想不得满分都难!

一、写作时需考虑哪些方面的因素?

(1)本话题所需要的词块、语块。

(2)本话题的写作模板结构等。

(3)本话题所涉及到的经典名句、谚语等。

二、困惑与对策

困惑1:写什么?

以《How to learn well?》为题,写一篇作文,那么我们应该如何入手开始写作呢?来看看以下几张思维导图,能够帮你整理好一篇作文的写作框架。

初中英语写作思维导图,掌握住,英语作文想不得满分都难!初中英语写作思维导图,掌握住,英语作文想不得满分都难!

初中英语写作思维导图,掌握住,英语作文想不得满分都难!

困惑2:如何选材?

即使知道了写作框架,但在补充框架时又会遇到另一个困惑:如何选材?以下是一些关于写作选材的建议:

1.选定英语思维导图各区域所需的词块和语块。

2.将各区域的词块和语块按段落写成连贯的语篇。

3.对照思维导图自我批改,注意人称、时态语态、句型结构的正确使用。

困惑3:如何表达?

很多学生在写作时,使用的句式比较单一,因此文章大多雷同,缺乏个性。针对这些问题,我们可以从以下几个方面改进:

1.对相同意思,注意不同句式的表达法,选择更好的句式。

2.短文写作,表达力求精悍、生动、丰富,避免重复用一样的句式。

3.特别注意使用承上启下的词语和句子。

三、思维导图在英语作文写作中的应用实例

写作流程:

1. 审题、理清思路:考虑写什么(挑选关键词,搭建作文框架)。

2. 选择词语:根据话题和作文框架选用所需要的语料(词块和语块)。

3. 遣词造句:根据思维导图中的语料,用合适的句型写作。

4. 语篇定稿:根据思维导图修改润色作文——紧扣主题、表达准确,关联自然,语篇流畅。

实例1:

假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明,参加了上星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛,他们的不同表现使你深有感触。请你根据下列表各中的内容提示写一篇英语短文。

芳芳 明明
1.认为自己英语好,不需要努力;花费时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服

2.因准备不足,太紧张,而没有完成演讲。

1.努力学习,向别人请教;赛前两天腿受伤,但不放弃

2.在比赛中表现良好

应该向明明学习

参考词汇:英语演讲比赛 English Speech Contest

要求:

1. 词数:80~100个

2. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数

3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥

Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

Before the contest, Fangfang thought__________________.

范文1

Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

Beforethe contest, Fangfang thought her Englishwas the best.Soshespent lots of time pickingsome beautiful clothes for herselfinstead oftrying to work hardat English for the contest.As a result, she didn’t do well in the contestbecauseshe hadn’t got ready forthe contest.

ButMingming was different from Fangfang. Heworked hard at Englishandasked others for help.Especially, his legwas hurttwo days before the contest,buthenever gave up.In the end, hewon the contest.

No doubt, from Mingming we should learn :No pains, No gains. From now on, I mushlearn fromMingming.

范文2

Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

Before the contest, Fangfang thought shewas good at English,andthat she didn’t need to spend more time onthe contest at all. She alwaysconsidered pickingsome beautiful clothes for the contest.ButMingming was different. Heworked hard at Englishandasked others for help.Thoughhe hadhurt his legtwo days before the contest, henever gave up.

In the end, Fangfang didn’t get ready wellenough. At the contest, she wassonervousthatshe she failed.ButMingming wonbecause ofhis efforts.

In my opinion, we shouldlearn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.

范文3

Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

Before the contest, Fangfang thought that shewas good at English.Soit wasn’t necessary tospend lots of time preparingfor the contest.What she only thoughtwas what clothes should wear,whichmake herself more beautiful at the contest. At last, she wastoonervoustofinish the contestbecauseshe didn’t get ready very well.

Instead, Mingming had beenworking at Englishandasking others for help.What’s more, he hadhurt his legtwo days before the contest.Buthe hadnever given up.As the result,hewon the contest.

I thinkwe shouldlearn from Mingming: Work hard and never give up.

实例2:

生活是丰富多彩的,没有爱好的人生是不完整的人生。亲爱的同学,在生活中,你有什么兴趣爱好吗?这个兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的?它给你的生活增添了哪些色彩?请你以 “My Hobby”为题,结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文。(词数80个左右)

要求:

1.语句通顺,合乎逻辑,书写规范。

2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。

初中英语写作思维导图,掌握住,英语作文想不得满分都难!

范文1

Readingis my hobby.When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl.From then onIbecame interested inreading books.

Reading cannot onlykill the time,but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can alsosolve many problemsfor me.

In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.

范文2

My favourite hobby iswatching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It wassocreativethatit made meenjoy a lot.From then on, Ibecame a movie fan.

Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too.On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed.On the other hand, I canlearn lots of knowledgefrom movies.

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